Understanding Visual Culture- Tutor Feedback- Assignment 1

Overall, I was really pleased with my feedback, especially as it was for my first assignment. My tutor did make some good points on how I can improve my work such as 

  • including more references to set texts
  • include more analysis of works of art and how they relate to ideas learnt.

There were also some small points that I had missed from some of the exercises such as

  • Exercise 1- Greenburg’s key observation that Renaissance artists sought to ‘conceal art’ where Modernist artists sought to ‘reveal it’.
  • Exercise 3- When Marx talks about ‘the ecomony’ he is referring to the national or indeed international ecomony rather than to the domestic ecomony of a particular household or individual
  • Exercise 7- Baudelaire also suggests that the Flaneur should adopt the personality of the dandy and that this ‘phlegmatic’ attitude suggests a detached or voyeuristic
  • Kimberley Unsworth Assignment One



About kunsworthphotography

I am currently studying towards a BA (Hons) in Photography with OCA and I have 2 children, Evie(4 years old) and Connor(3 years old)
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